Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文：

1. 家庭；

2. 工作；

3. 业余生活。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】题目要求根据所给提示和自己的想象力写一篇以“十年后的我”为主题的英语短文。写作要点包括：家庭、工作和业余生活等三个方面。词数在100词左右，开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了宾语从句、一般将来时等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①what my life will be like in the future，②my life will be very different in ten years，③I will work in a computer company as a program designer，④whatever I do等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用probably, in my free time, on my holidays, in a word等词和短语来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了get along well with, continue to do, such as, around the world等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。