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4．假定你是李华，上个月你从www．newegg．com上网购了一台咖啡机，收到后发现少了
电源线．请你就此事用英文给该网站负责人写封邮件，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．陈述问题；
3．提出要求．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing to make a complaint．Last month I ordered a coffee maker from your website www．newegg．com．To my great delight，your delivery was so quick that I received it within only a few days．However，upon packing the package，I found the power line of the coffee maker was missing．Haven't you checked everything carefully before the delivery？I strongly demand that you mail one proper line for me or give me my money back．I hope my demand will be satisfied．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours．
Li Hua．

分析 这是一封投诉信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，用一般过去时态陈述问题；一般现在时态提出要求．内容包括：1．写信目的；2．陈述问题；3．提出要求；4．期望得到答复．
高分句型：
1．To my great delight，your delivery was so quick that I received it within only a few days 句子里To my great delight表示"让我非常高兴的是"；so…that 表示"如此…以至于"；within only a few days 表示"几天以后"．
让我非常高兴的是，你们的送货速度是如此的快速以至于几天以后我就收到货了．
2．However，upon packing the package，I found the power line of the coffee maker was missing．句子里upon 是介词，表示"一…就"，做时间状语；the power line 表示"电源线"．
可是，我一打开包装就发现少了一条电源线．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
   I'm writing to make a complaint．（写信目的） Last month I ordered a coffee maker from your website www．newegg．com．To my great delight，your delivery was so quick that I received it within only a few days．【高分句型一】However，upon packing the package，I found the power line of the coffee maker was missing．【高分句型二】Haven't you checked everything carefully before the delivery？（陈述问题） I strongly demand that you mail one proper line for me or give me my money back．I hope my demand will be satisfied．（提出要求）
     Looking forward to your reply!（期望得到答复）
                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

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