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2．上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法．你的信必须满足以下要求：
1．简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2．说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封信，就上海博物馆将要举办的一次画展场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）发表自己的想法．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2．说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）．
重要短语：hear from…（收到…来信），as follows（如下），in terms of （就…而言），have advantages over（比…有优越性），be located in （位于…），be available to（可得到的，可利用的），after all （毕竟），be familiar to（为…所熟悉），with regard to（就…而言），be set in（以…为场景），preserve sth（保存某物），in a general sense（在一般意义上讲），of no match（比不上）；be qualified （能胜任）；to sum up（总之），．
【高分句型一】
1．I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum．
此处是由"that"引导的同位语从句，解释说明名词"opinion"的具体内容．
【高分句型二】
2．it is located in the People's Square，which is the center of the city．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型三】
3．Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country．
此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"Another advantage"，谓语动词为"is"，表语为"that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country"．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam：
 I have heard from the newspaper that you，the Shanghai Museum，are planning to organize a famous painting exhibition．And you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or the art gallery．I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum．【高分句型一】My reasons are as follows．（写信的目的及对场所的选择）
 In terms of convenience，the museum has more advantages over the gallery．First，it is located in the People's Square，which is the center of the city．【高分句型一】So people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1，2 and 8，which are available to people from nearly every district．【高分句型二】It saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble of traffic jam．Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country．【高分句型三】After all the Shanghai Museum is a landmark of our city familiar to nearly every Chinese．（理由：便利性）
With regard to the professional function，though it seems natural that an art exhibition be set in the gallery，in a more general sense，I think the museum has more advanced facilities to make the exhibition successful and to preserve the paintings well．As we know，the museum has successfully held many national and international exhibitions and its advertising and organizing experience is of no match； also its staff is qualified and professional．（理由：专业性）
To sum up，I am sure the show will be fantastic if it is held in Shanghai Museum．（结论）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．