Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一次”英语角”活动，请你给外教Peter写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括:

1.时间和地点；

2.交流主题(高中生使用手机的利弊；手机是否应该被允许带入学校)。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, head of the English Club in our school. I’m writing to tell you that we’ll have an English Corner activity, which will take place in the library next Saturday afternoon. You are welcome to join us！

The topics for discussion are related to smart phones, which are very popular among Chinese high school students.

We are going to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of high school students using smart phones and whether using smart phones should be allowed in high schools.

Please drop me a line to tell me your decision at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.时间和地点；2.交流主题(高中生使用手机的利弊；手机是否应该被允许带入学校)。第二，人称为第一人称，第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，时间和地点。第二段，交流主题。第三段，高中生使用手机的利弊；手机是否应该被允许带入学校。第四段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:allow， head of the English Club，English Corner activity，take place，in the library next Saturday afternoon，be related to ，smart phones，advantages and disadvantages， drop sb a line。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to tell you that we’ll have an English Corner activity，which will take place in the library next Saturday afternoon. 现在分词作后置定语We are going to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of high school students using smart phones。

第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。