Question

6．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
（1）遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化冲击等）；
（2）你的收获；
（3）感谢组织者．
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
参考词汇：文化冲击culture shock
Dear friends，
I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock
然而，我还是经历了一些意想不到的挑战，比如做自己理解的困难，与一些国家的人谈话，和处理文化冲击．
高分句型二：
Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．
我不仅提高了我的英语口语，还得到了终身的友谊．

解答 One possible version：
   I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．