Question

11．假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Wendy来信说她打算暑假期间来你所在的城市游玩，想让你为她推荐景点．请你用英语给她回信，内容包括下列要点：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐两个景点，说明理由；
3．告知你的安排，征求她的意见．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Wendy，
I'm glad to learn you're coming to my city during the summer vacation．
Here I express my warmest welcome．Now I'll introduce two famous tourist attractions to you．
First，I'd like to recommend the Erqi Memorial Tower．It was built to mark the great strike that took place on February 7^th，1923．Becauseof its history，it's become the symbol of the city．They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world．Every year many foreigners come to visit it．
After you arrive，I'll show you around the two places．Besides，we'llvisit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks．What do you think of my arrangement？If you plan to do something else，just let me know
Looking forward to your early reply．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world
另一个地方是少林寺，以武术闻名世界．
高分句型二：
Besides，we'll visit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks．
此外，我们将参观其他一些有趣的地方，享受当地的风味小吃．

解答 Dear Wendy，
I'm glad to learn you're coming to my city during the summer vacation．Here I express my warmest welcome．Now I'll introduce two famous tourist attractions to you．
First，I'd like to recommend the Erqi Memorial Tower．It was built to mark the great strike that took place on February 7^th，1923．Because of its history，it's become the symbol of the city．They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world（高分句型一）．Every year many foreigners come to visit it．
After you arrive，I'll show you around the two places．Besides，we'll visit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks（高分句型二）．What do you think of my arrangement？If you plan to do something else，just let me know．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Sincerely yous，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．