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5.爱心、梦想和诚信是你人生中最重要的三样东西,请你说明理由.字数120左右.Different people may bid for different things.As for me,I want dream,love and honesty in my life.
Dreams would be on the top of my list.Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life.(高分句型一)Money can buy a comfortable life,but without dreams,even a millionaire would find his life boring.
A person without love can never be happy.Our life is full of joys and sorrows,which we need people to share with.Faced with difficulties,we need friends to give us comfort and help.(高分句型二)Just as a saying goes,"A friend in need is a friend indeed".Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life,sof riendship would be in my list as well.(高分句型三)
Honesty is the best policy.We need honesty in our life.It is hard to imagine a society without honesty.So I value dream,love and honesty most in my life.
分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息 爱心、梦想和诚信是你人生中最重要的三样东西,请你说明理由.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息 2、要在合理范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:As for至于,关于;on the top of处于第一位;is full of充满了;Faced with面对;Just as a saying goes俗话说;
Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life.(高分句型一)
Faced with difficulties,we need friends to give us comfort and help.(高分句型二)
Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life,so friendship would be in my list as well.(高分句型三)
解答 Different people may bid for different things.As for me,I want dream,love and honesty in my life.
Dreams would be on the top of my list.Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life.(高分句型一)Money can buy a comfortable life,but without dreams,even a millionaire would find his life boring.
A person without love can never be happy.Our life is full of joys and sorrows,which we need people to share with.Faced with difficulties,we need friends to give us comfort and help.(高分句型二)Just as a saying goes,"A friend in need is a friend indeed".Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life,so friendship would be in my list as well.(高分句型三)
Honesty is the best policy.We need honesty in our life.It is hard to imagine a society without honesty.So I value dream,love and honesty most in my life.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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41.A.beds | B.tables | C.sofas | D.shelves |
42.A.get hold of | B.keep track of | C.take care of | D.make fun of |
43.A.difficult | B.fierce | V.natural | D.comfortable |
44.A.give in | B.participate in | C.look in | D.move in |
45.A.teacher | B.professor | C.lawyer | D.writer |
46.A.everything | B.something | C.nothing | D.anything |
47.A.keys | B.accesses | C.ways | D.attitudes |
48.A.discovering | B.watching | C.inventing | D.creating |
49.A.mildly | B.gently | C.highly | D.strongly |
50.A.unless | B.while | C.if | D.because |
51.A.success | B.voice | C.progress | D.dream |
52.A.instant | B.impossible | C.important | D.tiresome |
53.A.limited | B.used | C.increased | D.devoted |
54.A.pleasure | B.recreation | C.class | D.word |
55.A.attractive | B.clear | C.possible | D.clean |
56.A.life | B.college | C.house | D.world |
57.A.within | B.beside | C.near | D.beyond |
58.A.forces | B.arranges | C.requires | D.allows |
59.A.place | B.comfort | C.laziness | D.satisfaction |
60.A.fun-creating | B.time-consuming | C.heart-breaking | D.peace-loving |