Question

【题目】假如你是李华，刚从外国度假回来，你对度假期间的宾馆很不满意，宾馆房间小，有时没有热水，网络连接慢，食物不新鲜。请给该宾馆负责人写封信，说明情况，并要求赔偿。

注意：1.词数100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I stayed in your hotel a week ago. I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel. I have never stayed in a worse place before.

I was disappointed with the quality of the room, it was too small. And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower. Besides, seldom have I had such terrible food. However, I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.

I shall expect financial compensation of ￡300. Otherwise, I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封投诉信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式。第一段表明写信的目的；第二段写原因，也是本文的主体部分；第三段再次表达自己的要求和想法。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。倒装句的使用：seldom have I had such terrible food.定语从句的使用：I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.连接词的使用也很合理：besides，however，otherwise。