假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy．He didn't want share things with other people．For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I could not find．Then he eats it all by himself．He never helped other．He said he was busy．In fact，a game of tennis making him very busy．He didn't care if something he did made people angrily．For instance，in a cold night he played strong and loud music till 4o'clock in the morning．But he is different now．He often helps Grandma with housework，mom with cooking and his classmates their lessons．

分析作者在本文中讲述了弟弟Tom的变化，Tom小时候是一个自私的孩子，有东西自己藏着吃，从不帮助别人，但是现在不同了，他经常帮着做家务，还帮着同学学习．

解答 My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy．He didn't want∧share things with other people．For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I could not find．Then he eats it all by himself．He never helped other．He said he was busy．In fact，a game of tennis making him very busy．He didn't care if something he did made people angrily．For instance，in a cold night he played strong and loud music till 4o'clock in the morning．But he is different now．He often helps Grandma with housework，mom with cooking and his classmates∧their lessons．
详解：
1．want后面加 to；考查动词不定式，want to do sth 是固定短语，意为"想要做某事"．
2．去掉an；考查固定搭配，for example是固定短语，中间不加冠词，意为"例如"．
3．them 改为it；考查人称代词，此处代词指代前面的a chocolate cake，故用单数形式it．
4．where 改为which/that；考查定语从句，关系代词which/that指代place作为find的宾语．
5．eats改为ate；考查动词的时态，此处讲述过去的事情，用一般过去式．
6．other改为others；考查代词，分析句意为"他从不帮助其他人"可知此处用others指其他人．
7．making改为made；考查动词，这里需要的是一个谓语动词，又因讲述的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时made．
8．angrily改为angry；考查形容词，此处作形容词作宾语补足语．
9．in 改为on；考查介词，具体到在某一天晚上要用介词on．
10．classmates后加with；考查介词，此处加with与前面的help构成help sb with sth结构．