Question

19．以下是2014年中国某城市交通事故发生原因的调查信息统计表，请根据此表，写一篇120-150字的文章．你的文章需包括：
1．简要描述下表
2．谈谈你的看法和建议

Main accident causes	Number or accidents in 2014	Percentage rise （+） or fall （-） over 2013
1．drivers turning left without due care	608	+10%
2．drivers traveling too close to other vehicles	411	+9%
3．pedestrians crossing roads carelessly	401	+12%
4．drivers driving under the influence of alcohol	281	+15%
5．drivers failing to give a signal	254	-5%

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息写一篇关于2014年中国某城市交通事故发生原因的调查信息统计的文章，既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．
时态应该用一般现在时．人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：witness sth（见证，目睹某物），alarge number of（许多），bedue to （由于），thelack of …（…的缺乏），be responsible for （对…负责），imposestiff new penalties （实施严厉的新处罚），reinforce one's awareness （强化某人的意识），remindsb of sth （提醒某人某物），indispensable （不可缺少的，责无旁贷的）．
【高分句型】
1．the year of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents in a certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．
这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面主句的内容．
2．the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcing both drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．
这里是现在分词reinforcing作伴随状语，主句主语the public traffic safety education与动词reinforce构成逻辑上的主动关系．
3．No matter what measures are taken，the real intention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．
这里是由No matter what引导的让步状语从句．

解答 As what can be seen from the above table，theyear of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents ina certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．【高分句型】Among them，drivers'careless turning left isthe leading one followed by drivers'driving under the influence of alcohol becauseof its largest percentage increase．（描述表格）
What hide behind these five causes aredrivers'neglect of traffic rules and the lack of reverence for life，thepedestrians'life．And，of course，pedestrians should also be responsible fortheir own life．（看法）Therefore，relevant authorities shouldimpose stiff new penalties，including paying large amounts of fines and criminalcharges，on drivers caught because of drunk driving or other illegal behaviors．And also，the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcingboth drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．【高分句型】No matter what measures are taken，the realintention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．【高分句型】You should know that for your families，youare the indispensable one．Cherish life，love life．（建议）

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．