Question

14．澳大利亚位于最小的洲--大洋洲，是世界第六大国家．根据下表用英语介绍一下澳大利亚．
写作内容

气候	干旱气候为主，少部分沿海地区有重组的雨量
总面积	7692024平方公里
人口	大约2300万
两大城市	墨尔本和悉尼
风光特点	明媚的阳光，数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物
旅游	世界各地的游客来到这里欣赏它独特的美景

墨尔本：Melbourne
写作要求
只能用5个句子表达全部内容．
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
Located in the smallestcontinent-Oceania，Australia is the sixth largest countryin the world．It covers a total area of 7，692，024 squarekilometers with a population of about 23 million．It is amainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall．As is known to all，Melbourneand Sydney are the largest cities．Because itis famous for its bright sunshine，countlesssheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，thetourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息写一篇短文，介绍一下世界第六大国家，且 位于最小的洲---大洋洲的澳大利亚这个国家的相关情况．既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：be located in （位于），covers a total area of  （覆盖…的面积），a population of …（…人口），be famous for…（因…而著名），all over the world（全世界），enjoy its scenery  （欣赏风景）．
【高分句型】
1．As is known to all，Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities．
这里是as引导的非限制性定语从句，as 在从句中作主语．
2．Because it is famous for its bright sunshine，countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．
这里是由because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Located in the smallestcontinent-Oceania，Australia is the sixth largest countryin the world．It covers a total area of 7，692，024 squarekilometers with a population of about 23 million．（总面积、人口） Itis a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequaterainfall．（气候）As is knownto all，Melbourne and Sydney are the largestcities．【高分句型】（两大城市） Becauseit is famous for its bright sunshine，countlesssheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，thetourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．【高分句型】（风光特点、旅游）

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．