Question

5．假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Miss Rose常常在课余时间辅导你英语口语，使你在上周学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名．为此，你决定写一封感谢信，对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢．
注意：1．文章包括上述内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右；
3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Dear Miss Rose，
I am writing to you
to tell you a piece of good news．Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition．I stood out in the competition and won the first place．In my view，all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help（高分句型一）．During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．During the competition，I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state，which led to my success．I'm grateful for your help．Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress（高分句型二）．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．
空闲的时候，你经常帮助我的英语口语，我取得了快速进展的时间
高分句型二：
Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress．
如果没有你的帮助，我不可能取得这样的奖．我决定，我会更努力的尝试进一步的进展．

解答 MicrosoftInternetExplorer402DocumentNotSpecified7.8 磅Normal0Dear Miss Rose，
     I am writing to you  to tell you a piece of good news．Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition．I stood out in the competition and won the first place．In my view，all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help（高分句型一）．During your spare time，you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress．During the competition，I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state，which led to my success．I'm grateful for your help．Without your help，I couldn't have won such a prize．I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress（高分句型二）．
   I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．