Question

【题目】假设你是王敏，你的英国网友Lauren最近在中国学习。她发电子邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封电子邮件。

要点如下：

1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出建议并给出理由。

注意：词数100左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Hi, Lauren,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.

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Yours,

Wang Min

Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Lauren,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.

Here are some tips for you. First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the

local customs and cultures.

I hope my advice will be useful.

Yours,

Wang Min

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件。在中国学习的英国网友Lauren向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。根据以下要点给她写一封电子邮件。

要点如下： 表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议并给出理由。写作时根据所给要点，充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时把所提示的点写全，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时注意准确运用时态、语态。适当使用并列连词，合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

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