Question

【题目】假如你是张萌，是一位高中生。iPad已经成为你们中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐，阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请用英语给某报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。新的内容包括以下要点：

iPad给中学生带来的好处；

iPad给中学生带来的负面影响；

你对中学生使用iPad的看法和建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

I am a senior high school student, named Zhang Meng.

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Yours sincerely,

Zhang Meng

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am a senior high school student, named Zhang Meng. Nowadays, it’s fashionable for young students to have iPads. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them. Obviously, it’s of great help with our studies, especially with our English listening skills.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom listening to music with earphones, and some playing video games, which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.

In my opinion, the classroom is a place for studying, and concentration is terribly needed. Therefore, we should make good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons.

Meanwhile, schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Meng

【解析】本文是议论文。本文讨论的话题是学生使用ipad的好处和缺点。考生可以从ipad的便利性着手，如听音乐，学英语，以及与他人的交流以及便捷地寻找学习材料等方面说明ipad的好处。负面影响可以描述学生使用ipad容易进行一些与学习无关的事情，如玩游戏等，会对学习产生不好的影响。最后不要忘记发表自己的看法和提出建议。

【亮点说明】

本文的构思较为巧妙，脉络清楚，句型也是变化多样，并使用一些高级句式。如which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.这样的非限制性定语从句。另外还有一些高级词汇，如concentration，terribly，make good use of等等。