题目内容
13.假如你是中学生李华,你的外教John想推荐你去参加一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛,但是最近你母亲生病了,需要你照顾,所以你不得不谢绝.但是你向他推荐了你的好朋友张明参加.请根据以下要点给John写一封信,说明情况:1 谢绝John的推荐;2.说明你的理由;3.推荐张明参加并说明原因.
注意:1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数);
2.可以恰当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear John,
Thank you very much for your recommendation.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 文是一篇写给朋友的回信.主要分为以下几点:第一部分是解释了我为什么不能参加这次比赛的原因;第二部分是介绍了我的朋友张明去参加以及对张明的介绍;第三部分就是对于自己不能参加而表示歉意.文章书写过程中,首先要理清题目的意思,掌握文章大意,其次就是掌握题干所给的信息,根据所给的信息对文章进行初步的分段,然后根据文章的要点逐一进行阐述,最后检查自己的句型以及词汇是否有错误的地方,并且最重要的一点就是书信类的文章,格式是否符合要求,文章字数是否控制得当.本文的格式符合要求,字数恰当,并且文章的内容清晰,用词新颖值得学生加以参考.
【亮点说明】语言简练,条理清晰,采用常见的三段形式.
It's a great opportunity to take part in the English speech contest.(高分句型)
My mother has been ill for several days and I have to take care of her in my spare time,so I don't have enough time to prepare for the speech contest.(高分句型)
I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming,who I think is the most suitable person to participate in this contest.(高分句型)
解答 Dear John,
Thank you very much for your recommendation.It's a great opportunity to take part in the English speech contest.(高分句型)However,I'm afraid that I can't attend it.My mother has been ill for several days and I have to take care of her in my spare time,so I don't have enough time to prepare for the speech contest.(高分句型)
I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming,who I think is the most suitable person to participate in this contest.(高分句型)He is good at English and speaks fluent English.Besides,he is a member of the environmentally-friendly club and devotes much time to the protection of the environment.I‘m sure his good knowledge of environmental protection and perfect spoken English will enable him to achieve success.(高分句型)
Sorry again for my absence.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体,比较好写.学生在写作的过程中,首先思路要清晰,要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来,遇到不会的要学会替换所用语,来达到同样的意思.在每一篇作文中,对于表达观点的句子,都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感,适当运用俗语,运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化,表达地道得体.

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