题目内容
5.最近,由于很多不遵纪守礼的行为,而导致了一些恶劣事故,如:成都女司机由于不文明驾驶而遭致暴力殴打.假设你是李华,请以"遵纪守礼"为主题,写一篇英语短文,向你校校报投稿.内容包括:(1)中国自古以来就是文明礼仪之邦.
(2)人人都该重礼仪、遵纪守礼.
(3)谈谈你认为中学生应该如何做到遵纪守礼.
注意:(1)词数:100左右.
(2)为使行文连贯,可适当增加细节.
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:discipline (U) 纪律 civilized文明的
Recently,there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving.
分析 本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍如何遵纪守礼.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态. 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构.比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on.是非谓语短语做状语.only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.使用了倒装句.此外,文章还使用了大量短语in my opinion,such as,last but not least,as far as I am concerned等.以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯.
解答 Recently,there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion,both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.
China is a civilized country with a long history.(高分句型)Our ancestors attached great importance to"Li"-civilized behavior.Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.
As middle school students,we should be strict with ourselves.(高分句型)Firstly,we ought to respect the old and take care of children.Besides,we should behave ourselves,such as dining in good manners,waiting in line on many occasions and so on.(高分句型)Last but not least,we must obey school and society discipline,not cheating in exams.
As far as I am concerned,only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.(高分句型)
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
A.February-it's one of the most pleasant months of the year.Most days have clear,sunny skies and the average temperature is a very cool 14°C.With an average monthly rainfall of only 20mm it is also one of the driest months.
B.April-it's a warm spring month with moderate temperatures averaging around 21°C,and it is very wet,with 200mm rainfall on average for the month.
C.June-although it is the start of summer with average temperatures reaching a hot 28°C,you will not see much sun as it is usually very cloudy.It is also one of the wettest months of the year with frequent rain and average monthly rainfall of 240mm.
D.August-it is the hottest month of the year with average temperatures of 30°C.Generally very sunny during the day,but with frequent heavy rain showers in the evening that make it the wettest month of the year with an average monthly rainfall of 280mm.
E.October-this mid-autumn month is still pleasantly warm with average temperatures of 20°C.Days are mostly cloudy and overcast although rainfall levels are relatively low,averaging 70mm for rain for the month.
F.December-it is one of the coldest months of the year with average temperatures of 13°C.Night can be very cold.Mostly sunny,with a moderate average monthly rainfall of 60mm.
71.Corn-it requires a warm weather for strong and rapid growth.As it needs very wet soil,choose a time when there will be plenty of rain.High temperatures will cause corn to lose its sweet flavor. | |
72.Tomatoes-these popular plants are easy to grow as they can resist most pests and diseases.They require low temperatures,plenty of direct sunlight and dry conditions for best results. | |
73.Onions-these are a cold-season crop,easy to grow in the right conditions.They need a moderate amount of rain to keep the soil damp,but too much will cause them to rot.They should be planted during sunny period,as they grow best with plenty of direct sunlight. | |
74.Eggplants-these are tropical or subtropical,hot-season vegetables that need lots of direct sunlight.They grow best when the weather is very hot and there is plenty of water in the soil. | |
75.Potatoes-the taste of home-grown potatoes is far superior to store bought ones.They need a mild to warm conditions and relatively dry soil for best growth.They also require cloudy,overcast conditions for most of the time to prevent sunburn. |
72.A
73.F
74.D
75.E.