题目内容
【题目】近年来全球极端气候和重大自然灾害越来越频繁,其中很大一部分原因是由于人类活动所造成的。China Daily举行征文活动,警示人们要保护环境。请你写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
注意:
1. 要列举极端气候或自然灾害及其造成的影响;
2. 分析原因;
3. 呼吁人们关爱地球,保护环境。
词数:100---120个左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Over the past years, there have been frequent extreme weather and natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, snowstorms, earthquakes and so on. These have killed millions of people and destroyed countless homes.
Improper human activities contribute a lot to those disasters. We have cut down too many trees, badly polluted the environment, and wasted plenty of resources. What we do is threatening human survival and development.
So it is high time that we protected our environment. We should plant more trees, reduce the use of vehicles, and save resources like water and electricity. Everyone can make a difference to the environment. Only if we stop damaging the earth and do our best to protect it can we make world a pleasant place to live in.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是写一篇短文,参加征文活动,警示人们要保护环境。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。
【亮点说明】本文层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如主语从句So it is high time that we protected our environment.What we do is threatening human survival and development.倒装句Only if we stop damaging the earth and do our best to protect it can we make world a pleasant place to live in.等