题目内容
【题目】假设你是新华中学的学生李华,父母答应你今年高三毕业后去英国作10天的观光旅游。请你给英国网友Tom写封电子邮件,咨询以下事情:
1、不随旅游团的食宿、交通等问题;
2、必看景点与时间安排;
3、邀请他到中国观光。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
How’s everything going? I’m allowed to enjoy a 10day visit to England after my college entrance examination by my parents. Now,I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor by telling me something of essential use in advance.
Here are several key questions related to my journey. For one thing,could you offer me,since I’m not turning to any tourist agency,some selfhelp accommodation and transportation information in England? For another,I can’t wait to visit some mustsee tourist attractions. Meanwhile,if it doesn’t trouble you much,could you please help me arrange the time properly so that I can completely enjoy myself then?I shall thank you if you will kindly introduce me one or two websites on your local culture and custom as I’m an entire stranger there.
In return,it would be my great honor and pleasure if you could come to China as my guest. I believe I could be a distinguished guide!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求你给英国网友Tom写封电子邮件,咨询以下事情:1、不随旅游团的食宿、交通等问题;2、必看景点与时间安排;3、邀请他到中国观光。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了状语从句if it doesn’t trouble you much,could you please help me arrange the time properly so that I can completely enjoy myself then?和 In return等词汇。