题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是星光中学的学生李华,最近你要参加“汉字英雄”比赛,你的外国好友Tom经常参加各种大型比赛,有着非常丰富的比赛经验,赛前就如何调整心态你向他寻求意见,请根据以下要点写一封邮件:
1. 比赛的简单介绍;
2. 寻求意见;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Tom,
How have you been recently? Everything is going well here. But I’m writing to you in order to get some help from you.
I an going to participate in the Chinese Character Hero competition, which is aimed at giving teenagers the opportunity to show their level of Chinese characters and giving them a stage to perform. I attach a great deal of importance to this competition and really want to show my best, but I’m quite nervous. I know you have taken part in many competitions before and must have a lot of experience in how to adjust the state of mind. I hope you can give me some suggestions to reduce my nervousness.
With your help, I’m sure I will get a good result in this competition. Thank you very much. I’m looking forward to your reply!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信,根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点:1. 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据提示信息或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。写书信时要注意提示所给的要点有逻辑顺序的表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,包含了题目中所含的三个要点:1. 比赛的简单介绍;2. 寻求意见;表达感谢。除此之外,文章使用了多种句式和结构。比如 I am going to participate in the Chinese Character Hero competition, which is aimed at giving teenagers the opportunity to show their level of Chinese characters and giving them a stage to perform.运用了复杂的定语从句;With your help, I’m sure I will get a good result in this competition. 是with引导的条件句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语participate in , aimed at, attach a great deal of importance, taken part in, looking forward to等,使得文章更加流畅,同时也更具文采。