Question

假设你叫张林。你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。

现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复。

1．建议骑自行车上学；

2．自行车是学生常用交通工具；

3．骑自行车的一些好处；

4．骑自行车注意的问题。

注意：

1．词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Andrew,

Very happy to hear from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months.

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Andrew,

Very happy to hear from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months. As to the question about the transportation to and from school , I’d like to recommend your riding a bicycle . Here are some reasons .

Firstly , riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among students , for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot. Next , parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school no matter how busy the traffic could be. Actually , bicycle riding is also a practical to do exercise and protect the environment .What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it .In this way ,you will feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here .

Hopefully , what I have mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a happy stay in our school .

Yours sincerely ,

Zhanglin

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封书信应用文，向英国朋友来校学习的交通方式提出建议。要求提示较详细，考生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题，根据提示写作主要有三段内容，第一段已经给出提示，开门见山表明自己的态度及建议——骑自行车上学；第二段具体描述骑自行车的好处及注意问题；第三段结束，提出自己的希望，表达自己的祝福。另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第二人称。再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语，应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章符合书信的写作要求，要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如hear from，as to，recommend，no matter how busy，protect the environment并用动名词做主语，buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot；parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school ；还运用了主语从句：What you should do carefully is just to…; what I have mentioned above could be helpful… 注意了句子的衔接如：Here are some reasons. Firstly，Next , Actually, In this way, Hopefully等。这些词句用得恰当到位，为文章增添色彩。

考点：应用文——书信