题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校外教Becky回美国度假即将返回,给你发来e-mail,询问你希望她帮你从美国带什么礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。要点如下:
1. 询问度假情况;
2. 希望得到什么礼物;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Becky,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA. How was your holiday? You must have had great fun together with your family back in your motherland after working so long in China. I hope you can share your wonderful experiences with us afterwards.
It is very kind of you to offer to buy gifts for me. I would quite appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary and several popular novels that sell well in your country. I am sure they will help me improve my English. I will also prepare a gift for you in return.
Thanks again for your kindness, and we are all looking forward to seeing you soon. Welcome back!
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇考查的作文类型是书信。
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一假定你是李华,你校外教Becky回美国度假即将返回,给你发来e-mail,询问你希望她帮你从美国带什么礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。要点如下:
1. 询问度假情况;
2. 希望得到什么礼物;
3. 表达感谢。
第二,人称为第一人称。第三,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段,询问度假情况;第二段,希望得到什么礼物。第三段,表达感谢。第四段,表达良好祝愿。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: return ,appreciate ,have fun,improve my English,share …with
第四步:确定较为高级的句子: 省略that的宾语从句I am sure they will help me improve my English. that引导的定语从句 several popular novels that sell well in your country. It作形式主语It is very kind of you to offer to buy gifts for me.
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides,however,finally.
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【高分句型1】
Not only will they help me improve oral English, but also they increase my vocabulary. 它们不仅能帮助我提高英语口语,还能增加我的词汇量。本句为部分倒装句。
【高分句型2】
Please share your wonderful experiences with us,which will help us have a good understanding of American culture. 请与我们分享你的美好经历,这将有助于我们更好地了解美国文化。本句为which引导的非限制性定语从句。