Question

【题目】假设你是李华，在学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下提示写一封信给你的英语老师李老师，以感谢她对你的帮助。

1.表达感激之情并说明原因；

2.描述自己以前和现在的英语学习状况；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.不可逐条翻译；

4.开头语已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mrs Li,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ___________________________________________________________________

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Looking forward to you early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mrs Li,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. With your help, I have won the first prize in my school’s English Speech Contest. In the past, I had problems in learning English. I found it difficult for me to understand the English teacher in class. But you always encourage me patiently and give me some suggestions. Following your advice, I kept on reading and listening every day. Little by little, I have made great progress in my English.

Thank you again for your generous help. May you be happy everyday! Looking forward to you early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

【解析】本文属于感谢信。感谢信的写作格式一般分为三部分。第一部分表达感谢之情并说明原因。信的开头应问候对对方，并对对方的关心和提供的帮助表示由衷的感谢。第二部分细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助并说明该帮助所起的作用等。第三部分再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

亮点分析：本文格式正确，内容完整，行文连贯。文章主要以单句为主，句子简洁明了。在文章中还使用了非谓语作状语（Following your advice, I kept on reading and listening every day），运用了祈使句（May you be happy every day!）。同时还运用了许多高级词汇，如express my sincere gratitude to，have problem in doing sth， encourage sb to do sth，keep on doing sth， little by little look forward to doing sth.等，为文章增添了亮点。