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1．学校将为高三学生举办一场英语沙龙．假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿，呼吁高三学生调节好学习和生活，保持良好的心态．
内容要点：（1）描述周围同学现状：熬夜多，运动少，学习效率不高．
（2）提出至少两条建议．
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
（2）可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Good morning，everyone!It's my honor to be here to make a short speech．Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively．Some can't help falling asleep in class，because they often study too late into the night．Others seldom have sports，which surely does harm to their health．
As we know，enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students．We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep，so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure．Besides，doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot，keeping fit，reducing stress and so on．Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports．And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well．That'sall．Thankyouforlistening!

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给提示写一份发言稿．呼吁高三学生调节好学习和生活，保持良好的心态．写作要点：（1）描述周围同学现状：熬夜多，运动少，学习效率不高．（2）提出至少两条建议．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称和第二人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：make a speech （做演讲…），can't help doing （禁不住，忍不住做某事），late into the night （到深夜），do harm to（对…有害），be of great importance （重要），make use of （利用），spare some time（抽出时间）．

解答 Good morning，everyone！It's my honor to be here to make a short speech．Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively．Some can't help falling asleep in class，because they often study too late into the night．Others seldom have sports，which surely does harm to their health．【高分句型】（周围同学现状）
As we know，enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students．We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep，so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure．【高分句型】Besides，doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot，keeping fit，reducing stress and so on．【高分句型】Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports．And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well．【高分句型】（提出建议）
      That's all．Thank you for listening!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．