Question

Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened／reduced while happiness will be doubled．

请根据以上的话写一篇不少于120词的英语短文，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

注意：

①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much. By sharing we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.

When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind. There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me. Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon. Little by little, I regained confidence. The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made progress in another important exam.

As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence. Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also psychologically.

【解析】本题主要根据：跟他人分享，悲伤会减少快乐会增加写一篇文章，即主要围绕分享的话题。本题要求结合日常生活，最佳题材是记叙文。范文为经典的三段论式写作，第一段引出话题，第二段讲述生活实例，最后一段表达感想，结构脉络十分清晰。范文第一段第一句We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much.首先使用了in which领导的定语从句，且使用了so…that如此...以致句式；第二段第一句When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind.使用了when领导的时间状语从句；第二段第二句There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam使用了when领导的时间状语从句；第二段第三句Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon.使用了非谓语动词做伴随状语，以及which领导的非限制性定语从句；最后一段第一句it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence.使用了it is. …that强调句句型。范文使用了许多好的短语，包括：come to涉及到，be caught in陷入，Little by little一点一点，bring back拿回等常用短语。在词语使用上本文最大亮点就是带有强烈情感的词语的使用，如第二段my world turned grey我的世界变灰了grey一词的使用，表现出了当时的绝望，最后一段helped me out of the dark moment中dark一词的使用，使得文章感情色彩十分浓厚。总结：对于需要结合日常生活的作文，写作记叙文较好。

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