Question

【题目】某英文杂志正在举办"Whether should high school students stay up late to study?"为主题的征文活动。假如你是紅星中学李华，就“高中学生该不该熬夜学习“在学校作了一次调查，結果发现60%的同学认为应该熬夜学习，认为晚上学习安静，效率高，而还有40%的同学认为晚上不该熬夜学习，熬夜不利于身体，对学习没有多大帮助。况且白天又容易打瞌睡，得不偿失。现在请你给报社写一封信，反映此现并发表自己的观点。

注意：词数100左右.

參考词汇：gains cannot make up for losses 得不偿失

Dear Editor.

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Your's

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

With the learning task increasing in high school, more and more high school students are beginning to stay up late to study. Recently we did a survey about whether high school freshmen should stay up late to study or not

Opinions are divided into two parts. 60% of the students think they should study at night because there is no noise at that time and that they have higher learning efficiency.

However others think that they should stay up late to study have three reasons. First staying up does great harm to health. Second it is of no help to improve their grades. Third they will be dozy during the day so that gains cannot make up for losses.

As far as I’m concerned, health is more important than anything else. It is normal for high school freshmen to stay up late to study, but it is very harmful to health if they stay up too late frequently.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以紅星中学李华的名义用英语给报社写一封信。

这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为某英文杂志正在举办"Whether should high school students stay up late to study?"为主题的征文活动。假如你是紅星中学李华，就“高中学生该不该熬夜学习“在学校作了一次调查，結果发现60%的同学认为应该熬夜学习，认为晚上学习安静，效率高，而还有40%的同学认为晚上不该熬夜学习，熬夜不利于身体，对学习没有多大帮助。况且白天又容易打瞌睡，得不偿失。现在请你给报社写一封信，反映此现并发表自己的观点。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。