题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith 但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信:
1.感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助;
2.询问Mr.smith的近况并索要其联系方式;
3.邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:1.词数120-150;2. 可适当增加细节。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for your kind help when I stayed in America. With your help, my English has improved a lot and my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
How is Mr. Smith? I want to know something about his life. I tried to get in touch with him, but unfortunately I don’t have his address and can’t connect with him. Do you have his email address or his telephone number?
The Spring Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for Chinese, when all the family members get together. It is like Christmas in the western countries. Would you like to come to feel the Chinese culture? I am sure you will live happily here and learn a lot of funny things. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest.
Best wishes! I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文要求给你的美国同学Tom写一封信,要点已给出,根据要点文章可分三段来写,第一段感激对方的帮助,第二段询问Mr. smith的近况并索要其联系方式,第三段讲述中国春节的情况,并邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。最后是期待对方的回信。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:灵活变换;3.文章的内容要点要齐全;4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,120-150单词左右。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:现在进行时表示将来The Spring Festival is coming;非限制性定语从句It is an important traditional festival for Chinese, when all the family members get together.;宾语从句I am sure you will live happily here and learn a lot of funny things。2.使用了过渡词语:Besides等。3.使用了重要短语:with your help在你的帮助下;get in touch with联系;show around带领……参观;look forward to期待。