Question

【题目】假定你是中学生李华，你校为迎接各国友好学校的访问，欲招聘一位英语校史讲解员，你对此非常感兴趣。请给学 校写一封自荐信，内容包括：

1．性格外向。善于沟通；

2. 有较强的英语口语能力；

3. 有在校史展览馆工作经历。

注意：1.词数 100 词左右；

2. 可适当增添细节以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已为你写好。

Dear headmaster:

I have learned that our school is in need of a narrator of our school museum , and I’m writing to apply for the position.

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear headmaster:

I have learned that our school is in need of a narrator of our school museum, and I’m writing to apply for the position.

I am LiHua, a senior three student of our school. Outgoing and warmhearted, I have no difficulty in communicating with others, which I think will make them feel at home. As for my English, after learning English for many years, I have got the hang of it, especially oral English. So I’m sure that I can present our history to our guests properly. Another aspect I want to mention is that as a volunteer of our school, I worked in our history museum for several months, thus making it easier for me to do the job.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration, and I am looking forward to your reply.

【解析】

本文为自荐信。自荐信是向用人单位谋求职位的书信。写好自荐信要说明原因，推销自己，表达认识及表明态度，这是全文的核心内容。一是说明为什么应聘；二是要说清你希望承担什么工作；三是要说明自己的条件、能力，表达对胜任工作的信心等，表明应聘的必备条件，增强对方的信任感。这是文章的重点。四是要注意措辞得体及突出个性的包装。

本文的结构完整，内容有说明力。能正确地表达自己的特长，态度谦虚、语气委婉。

第一段中运用了一个由and连接的并列句。简明扼要地叙述了自己写信的原因。运用了较高级的词汇有in need of … apply for…。

第二段结构最为复杂多变。第二句Outgoing and warmhearted, I have no difficulty in communicating with others, which I think will make them feel at home.中用形容词作状语，表主语的特点及包括一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。非谓语作状语： after learning English for many years, I have got the hang of it, especially oral English.。由that引导的名词从句：So I’m sure that I can present our history to our guests properly。最后一句较为复杂，其中包括了省略that的定语从句Another aspect（that） I want to mention,表语从句…that as a volunteer of our school及thus making it easier for me to do the job.的结果状语。

最后一段用一个较高级的句型I would appreciate it if…结束了本文，可谓言辞一定要诚恳，给文章加分不少。