Question

10．请以"How to stay healthy"为题，写一篇英语短文，内容必须包括以下要点：
  1．健康的饮食    2．适当的锻炼    3．平和的心态
注意：1．词数100左右；     2．可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇读写任务作文，根据所提供的材料信息，以"How to stay healthy"写一篇英语短文，写作时应以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点必须包括：1．健康的饮食；2．适当的锻炼；3．平和的心态．
重要短语：
 the importance of （..的重要性）  first of all（首先）  body-building（健身）  deal with（处理）  play an important role（起重要作用）  
高分句型：
1．They will enable us to become energetic to deal with our daily work．Also，enough sleep plays an important role．该句灵活运用了许多短语及高级词汇，如enable sb to do，deal with等．
2．Only after we have got a sound sleep can we get refreshed．该句为倒装句．
3．More importantly，if you want to stay healthy，you'd better stay peaceful most of your time even if you are faced with troubles or difficulties．

解答 Everyone knows the importance of staying healthy．The problem is how we can stay healthy．（点明主题）
  First of all，a balanced diet does benefit us much．We have to eat enough body-building and energy-giving foods，such us vegetables，meat，eggs and so on．They will enable us to become energetic to deal with our daily work．Also，enough sleep plays an important role．（高分句型1）Only after we have got a sound sleep can we get refreshed．（高分句型2）Besides，we have to take regular exercise，such us ball games，swimming or running．These sports are the key to keeping fit．More importantly，if you want to stay healthy，you'd better stay peaceful most of your time even if you are faced with troubles or difficulties．（高分句型3）A good mood will help you be a wise person and then get your problems solved．（保持健康的详细方法）

点评 读写任务类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型．