Question

18．假如你班李津（男）和王英（女）两位同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法，请描述下列各图，并谈谈你的看法． 

注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头己给出，不计入总词数．
Li Jin and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three．They both work hard but they have different learning methods．
LiJin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）As a result，he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep．
　　However，Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning．She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class．Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
　　In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息李津（男）和王英（女）两位同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法，请描述下列各图，并谈谈你的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：李明经常上课睡觉，不听教师讲课；王英上课认真听讲，仔细记笔记；而李明经常晚上学到深夜；王英晚上做完作业，早早上床睡觉，休息得很好；表达出自己对这一现象的看法． 2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：instead of 而不是；As a result结果是；stay up late熬夜；However然而；Because of由于；In my opinion以我的观点来看；
Li Jin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）
As a result，he misses lots of points that the leacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）
Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）

解答 Li Jin and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three．They both work hard but they have different learning methods．
　　Li Jin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）As a result，he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep．
　　However，Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning．She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class．Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
　　In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．