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【题目】请阅读下面内容, 按照要求写一封书信。

Despite being asked to stay safe during the outbreak(爆发) of the novel coronavirus(新型冠状病毒), students and teachers across the country can keep themselves busy with classes online.

A student used a mobile phone to attend an online class at home in the Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region in April. His home was recently connected to the Internet.

DingTalk, a virtual workplace developed by Alibaba Group, held online classes for about 50 million students nationwide, from primary to high school level.

Physics teacher Zhao Chuanliang gave an online class to his students at Henan Experimental Middle School in Zhengzhou on Sunday.

(写作内容)假设你是李华,按照要求,用英语给英语老师写一封信,汇报今年寒假期间的网络课程学习情况,内容包括:

1.你和同学在网络课程期间的真实表现,包括上课与平时作息等;

2.寒假网络课程期间父母如何关心你的学习; 3.这次网络课程给你的感受。

(写作要求) 1.词数为120左右,写三段;

2.书信开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;

3.不能直接引用原文语句,作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

(评分标准) 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am writing to report my online lessons.

From Monday through Friday, I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons. I was active in communicating with teachers, for they couldn’t see me online. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting or posting messages or clicking likes during live-streaming lessons.

My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes. Now I am at school and their life is back to normal.

Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school. For me, every minute of the online courses counts, since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences.

Thank you for reading my letter. Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于读写任务,要求考生写一封汇报,说明今年寒假期间的网络课程学习情况。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构:总分法

总分法指先点出写信目的,再逐点进行汇报。

要求:

1.写信目的

2.网课期间自己和同学的表现

3.父母对自己学习的关心

4.自己的感受

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

log ontoonline lessonsbe active in, pay little attention to, busy doing sth, under pressure, distract, back to normal, effective, face-to-face lessons, national college entrance examination, consequence

第三步:连词成句

1. I got up at seven and logged onto DingTalk to attend online lessons

2. I was active in communicating with teachers…

3. Some of my classmates, though, paid little attention to courses, busy chatting…

4. My parents were under pressure as they wanted to monitor me at home to ensure I was not distracted by games while attending online classes.

5. their life is back to normal…

6. Online courses are as effective as face-to-face lessons at school.

7. since the national college entrance examination, determining which university I can attend, may have lifelong consequences

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

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【题目】Getting your children to stop lying is challenging. There are many influences (TV, movies, video games and some great books) in which lies are common. Children see parents lie to others, if only to be polite. Most parents add to that with tales about the lives and activities of Santa Claus or the Tooth Fairy, or to allay fears. (“This will not hurt!”) Parents do this out of love, but for some children, lying can become a problem. The most common reactions to children who lie are explaining why it is wrong and punishment. But as ways of changing behavior, these are ineffective.

However, what counts is to praise. You could ask your child to say something that happened at school that is true. It is not critical what that is. This is about practice. When your child complies, praise him enthusiastically. Be specific: “That was great! You told me what happened just like I asked. Wow!” and give your child a hug or a high five. If your child says something true in the course of her day, praise that behavior too. Aim for one or two interactions like this a day. If you happen to “catch” your child in a lie, be matter-of-fact in your disapproval. Say something like, “That is not true and could get you in trouble outside of the hoe; it is better to say the truth.”

Besides, you should set a good example to your kids and tell the truth explicitly. This could be about something that happened when you were a child or something that happened during the day. It need not be dramatic. Another option is to play a game at dinner. Each person tells one thing that was true that day. Again, give a little praise to the child who normally lies if she plays along.

In most instances, children are unlikely to change behavior or develop the conduct you want. That does not mean ignoring, lying or letting it go. Rather, use very mild punishment (light reprimand, short loss of privilege, a brief time-out). More severe, harsh or enduring punishments (shouting, taking away something for a week, hitting) are not more effective in actually changing the frequency of lying.

Try these procedures for two to three weeks and see where you are. Usually they can be dropped by then. It is unlikely that lying will be completely removed, but with the right encouragement, it can be dramatically lessened.

1Which punishment is relatively ineffective?

A. A brief time-out.

B. Light reprimand.

C. Short loss of privilege.

D. Taking away something for a week.

2What can we conclude from the passage?

A. Parents can tell lies sometimes.

B. Lying will disappear thoroughly.

C. Punishment can change behaviors.

D. Praising your kids a lot is beneficial.

3Which of the following could serve as the best title?

A. Is Lying a Problem?

B. Can Kids Stop Lying?

C. What Can You Do When Kids Tell lies?

D. How Can You Punish Your Kids for Lying?

4Which best shows the structure of the text?

A. B.

C. D.

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