Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是尚德中学高二的学生李华，你的英国笔友Tom正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：

一、通常方式

1．邀请好友举行生日聚会 2．赠送生日礼物，表达生日祝福3.聚餐，吃蛋糕，唱歌，跳舞

二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由（至少说明一种方式和理由）

课题：subject research

*词数120

Dear Tom,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.

Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息来说明中国人过生日的方式。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如but the most common way is to hold a birthday party是非谓语短语做宾语。at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing是定语从句此外，文章还使用了大量短语for example，in this way，in return for等。