题目内容
3.第31届夏季奥运会将于2016年8月5日至21日在巴西(Brazil)举行.假定你是Tom,你打算去看奥运会足球比赛,现请你给巴西好友Lucy写一封信,内容包括:1.请Lucy帮忙预定足球门票;
2.预定房间,旅馆最好离体育馆近些;
3.推荐巴西几个旅游胜地.
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右;
3.信的格式已给出.
Dear Lucy,
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息第31届夏季奥运会将于2016年8月5日至21日在巴西(Brazil)举行.假定你是Tom,你打算去看奥运会足球比赛,现请你给巴西好友Lucy写一封信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:请Lucy帮忙预定足球门票;预定房间,旅馆最好离体育馆近些;推荐巴西几个旅游胜地.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:ask for寻求;As you know正如你所知;be crazy about对…狂热;ahead of time提前;If possible如果可能的话;In addition另外;Apart from除…之外;places of interest名胜古迹;
As you know,the 31st summer Olympic Games will be held in Rio de Janeiro from August 5 to August 21,2016.(高分句型一)
If possible I prefer the hotel which is near the stadium.(高分句型二)
Apart from watching matches,I also want to visit some places of interest.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Lucy,
How is everything?I'm writing the letter to ask for some help.
As you know,the 31st summer Olympic Games will be held in Rio de Janeiro from August 5 to August 21,2016.(高分句型一)I am crazy about football.Can you help me buy a ticket for the football match ahead of time?In addition,I hope that you can book a standard room for 8 nights for me.If possible I prefer the hotel which is near the stadium.(高分句型二)Apart from watching matches,I also want to visit some places of interest.(高分句型三)Would you please recommend some to me?
Thanks for your help.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Tom
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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