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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For a long time I had been longed for a piano of my own to practice on. There was a piano shop on the street through that I went to the school every day. Whenever I passed the shop, look at the piano which stood in the corner of the shop window. What desperately I had been dreaming day and night to possess a piano like that. Unfortunate, my father was just a clerk, but he could not afford to buy me an expensive piano, though he knew that I was very anxious for one. In my birthday, I went as usual to the shop window to look at the piano, but to my surprised the piano had gone. In fact, I should not have been surprised, other had the right to buy it, if they could afford to. Tears filled my eyes when I thought of being able to see that piano any more.

Answer 1

【答案】1. longed→longing

2.that→which

3.去掉the

4.look→looking

5.What→How

6. Unfortunate→Unfortunately

7.In→On

8. surprised→surprise

9. other→others

10.of后添加not

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。记叙了作者在上学路上的钢琴店里看到一架钢琴，日夜渴望拥有，但是家庭无法承担一架昂贵的钢琴。直到后来钢琴被买走，作者再也见不到那架钢琴了。

1.考查动词时态。动词短语long for表示“渴望……”，主语I与long for是主动关系，且根据上文I had been可知为过去完成进行时的主动时，故longed改为longing。

2.考查定语从句。本句为“介词+关系代词”结构定语从句修饰先行词street，由于介词提前，故关系代词只能用which不能用that。故that改为which。

3.考查冠词。根据短语go to school表示“去上学”。故去掉the。

4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知look在句中做非谓语动词，与逻辑主语I构成主动关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。故look改为looking。

5.考查连词。句意：我曾日夜梦想拥有一架那样的钢琴。此处修饰副词desperately，表示“多么，非常”应用how。故What改为How。

6.考查副词。此处要用副词放在句首作状语，故Unfortunate改为Unfortunately。

7.考查介词。具体日子之前用介词on。故In改为On。

8.考查名词。短语to one’s surprise表示“某人惊讶的是”。故surprised改为surprise。

9.考查代词。句意：事实上，我不应该感到惊讶，别人有权利买它，如果他们能买得起的话。此处表示“别人”且做主语应用others。故other改为others。

10.考查句意理解。句意：一想到再也看不到那架钢琴，我就热泪盈眶。根据对文意的理解，可知此处要加一个表示否定意义的词not。故of后添加not。