题目内容
【题目】假定你是武汉市某高中学校学生会主席李华,为有效配合新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情防控,湖北省教育厅宣布延期开学, 请你写一封英文延期开学通知发布在校园网上。要点如下:
1. 严禁学生假期到校。
2. 进行远程教育、在线心理辅导。
3. 如有调整,另行通知。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:
心理的 psychological
疫情 epidemic
教育部 Ministry of Education
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【答案】 NOTICE
Prevention and control of the novel coronavirus is the most important thing at present. According to the announcement of Ministry of Education, the new term opening date will be postponed/delayed. Maybe after March 20th. Before that, students are not allowed to go to school.
Everyone is required to exercise regularly and keep healthy. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during our absence from school.
Please take it seriously. In case of any change, you will be kept informed ahead of time.
The Students’ Union
Feb. 21st, 2020
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封英文延期开学通知发布在校园网上。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 严禁学生假期到校。(students are not allowed to come to school on holidays)
2. 进行远程教育、在线心理辅导。(distance education and online psychological guidance)
3. 如有调整,另行通知。(any adjustment will be informed later)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
prevention and control of; be postponed/delayed; be not allowed to; be required to; absence from school; take it seriously; ahead of time
第三步:连词成句
1. Prevention and control of the novel coronavirus is the most important thing at present.
2. According to the announcement of Ministry of Education, the new term opening date will be postponed/delayed.
3. Maybe after March 20th.
4. Before that, students are not allowed to go to school.
5. Everyone is required to exercise regularly and keep healthy.
6. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during our absence from school.
7. Please take it seriously.
8. In case of any change, you will be kept informed ahead of time.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
第五步:润色修改