Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，为庆祝建国70周年，你校将举办一场以“My Dream & Chinese Dream”为主题的中文演讲比赛(speech contest)，请你给Jason写一封信，邀请他参加比赛。内容包括:

1. 比赛时间：下周五3:00 p.m.；

2. 比赛地点：学校演讲厅（lecture hall）；

3. 事项：前三名有奖；5个老师担任评委（judge）。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jason,

I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing this e-mail to invite you to take part in the speech contest to be held in our school, whose title is "My Dream & Chinese dream”.

I do think it is a good chance to practice your Chinese. Besides, you can know a lot about China. The contest will be held at 3: 00 on Friday afternoon in our lecture hall. The first three winners will be given prizes. There will be five Chinese teachers and a student representative as judges. To get a good result, you'd better get prepared for it ahead of time. Do remember that you should give your speech in Chinese.

Wish you had a wonderful performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请对方参加中文演讲比赛。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 邀请参加比赛

2. 内容包括：

1）比赛时间：下周五3:00 p.m.；

2）比赛地点：学校演讲厅（lecture hall）；

3）事项：前三名有奖；5个老师担任评委（judge）。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

take part in；get prepared for；ahead of time

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union.

2. I'm writing this e-mail to invite you to take part in the speech contest to be held in our school, whose title is "My Dream & Chinese dream”.

3. I do think it is a good chance to practice your Chinese.

4. You can know a lot about China.

6. The contest will be held at 3: 00 on Friday afternoon in our lecture hall.

7. The first three winners will be given prizes.

8. There will be five Chinese teachers and a student representative as judges.

9. To get a good result, you'd better get prepared for it ahead of time.

10. Do remember that you should give your speech in Chinese.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改