Question

【题目】假如你是学生会主席，你所在的校园一些学生有不良饮食习惯，请你在升旗仪式后发表演讲，号召同学们养成健康饮食习惯。

内容包括：1、简述健康饮食习惯意义。

2、不良现象：不吃早餐，吃零食，挑食和暴饮暴食等，这些对身体有害。

3、提出你的健康饮食习惯建议

注意：（1）短文词数100词左右。

（2）内容充实，结构完整，可适当增加细节，以使语意连贯。

（3）书写须清晰、工整。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

From my point of view, we should have various healthy diets in order to keep fit, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly, and we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作，要求考生写一篇号召同学们养成健康饮食习惯的演讲稿，在演讲稿件中写出：健康饮食习惯意义；校园里的不良现象（不吃早餐，吃零食，挑食和暴饮暴食等），这些对身体有害；提出你的健康饮食习惯建议

第一步：审题

体裁：一般性应用文——演讲稿

格式：格式是演讲稿，要写明听演讲的对象（即称呼）和结束语。

要点：要包括三个要点——健康饮食习惯意义；校园里的不良现象（不吃早餐，吃零食，挑食和暴饮暴食等），不良健康饮食习惯对身体有害；提出你的健康饮食习惯建议。

结构：总分总法

第二步：列提纲（重点短语和词汇）

form ;healthy; habits; snacks; do harm to; diets ; keep fit; regularly; build up ; energy

第三步：连词成句

As the saying goes , it is hard to labor with an empty belly.

It’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

There are many bad eating habits among us students.

I think we should have various healthy diets in order to keep fit.

We should have enough energy in order to study better in the school time.

第四步：连句成篇

第五步：润色修改