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【题目】假设你是李华，在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物。礼物是一个标有姓名、生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子。收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意。请给你的英国笔友Johnson写一封邮件，内容包括以下要点：

1．描述网购的礼物；

2．介绍网上支付及配送情况；

3．谈谈你对网上购物的看法。

注意：1．100个词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．参考词汇：支付宝安全控件Alipay Security Control.

Dear Johnson,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Johnson,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago. It was a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It was so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it at first sight.

Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?

I have enjoyed shopping online very much through this experience. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays. We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the Internet. Agree with me?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作重在理顺所写内容的编排，可以采用三段式的文体。首先对我前几日所购买的生日礼物进行描述，简单描写一下它的外形及装饰（decorate）；进而对网上购物的支付和配送服务进行介绍，表达自己对支付宝这种支付方式非常满意和放心；最后，发表自己对网上购物的看法，可以从越来越多的人们都进行网上购物并且它非常的安全方便方面进行介绍。写作过程中注意语言的亲切，注意互动，因为这属于书信类文体，可适当使用疑问句来增加亲切感。本文的写作用注意对不会的表达进行替换，同时注意避免使用中式英文和硬译。对于高中作文的写作要注意多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。

【亮点说明】

文中使用合适的副词把各要点联系成文，如besides；也使用了一些高级的词汇词组如date of birth, be satisfied with, look forward to, spend time doing sth.等以提升文章的档次分。本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如There is no doubt that运用了同位语从句；which is very convenient and safe运用了定语从句。

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根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多于选项。

Many people are stuck in a life they don’t want, held in place by everything from financial restrictions to societal pressures. If you are looking to pursue your dreams, it can be discouraging to change everything at once.【1】

Write down your goals to get them out of your head and into reality. Be honest with yourself about what you want, no matter how impossible it seems and ignore what you “should” do based on the views of your friends, family or society. 【2】 Don’t leave anything out, no matter how small or silly it sounds. Look at the themes of your list to get an idea of what your dream life will look like.

【3】 Choose one that is relatively easy to accomplish, one that is doable but will require work and one that seems impossible based on your current circumstances and lifestyle. List the steps you will need to take to get to each goal, getting down to the little details.

【4】 Each time you complete one of the steps, cross it off so you can celebrate the process in addition to the end result. When you achieve the goal, find a way to continue integrating(使成为一体) it into your life.

Figure out how you can work your second two goals into your life.【5】 . If your big dream is to quit your job and travel the world, start a savings account that is dedicated to travel money and set aside a small amount each week for three years. Plan your steps like this and they will be doable and fit smoothly into your life.

1.Seek support from your friends and family.

2.You will need to have courage to make changes

3.Identify the top three things that will get you closer to your dream life.

4.Start with your smallest goal and work through the steps until you achieve it.

5.Choose a deadline for each goal, whether it is one year down the road or five.

6.List the things you want to accomplish in your life, both personal and professional.

7.Instead, make small, gradual changes to prepare the way to a dream life to make the process easier.

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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【题目】作文

假设你是李华，请根据以下要点，给你的一位美国笔友Robert写一封E-mail，谈谈寒假的安排，并询问Robert的寒假安排。可以适当增加细节。

1.在家休息，帮父母做家务 2.参加英语培训课程

3.去朋友家玩 4.游览四川的景点

注意：1.词数100词左右。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头句已为你写好，但不计入总词数

提示词：培训课程 English courses, 景点 tourist attractions，安排 arrangement(n)

Dear Robert,

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory.

【题目】根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。Although problems are a part of our lives, it certainly doesn’t mean that we let them rule our lives forever. One day or the other, you’ll have to stand up and say – problem, I don’t want you in my life.【1】 Problems with friends, parents, girlfriends, husbands, and children – the list goes on. Apart from these, the inner conflicts within ourselves work, too. These keep adding to our problems. Problems come in different shapes and colors and feelings.But good news is that all problems can be dealt with. Now read on to know how to solve your problems.Talk, it really helps. What most of us think is that our problem can be understood only by us and that no talking is going to help. 【2】 Talking helps you move on and let go.Write your problems. 【3】When you write down your problems, you are setting free all the tension from your system. You can try throwing away the paper on which you wrote your problems. By doing this, imagine yourself throwing away the problems from your life.Don’t lose faith and hope. No matter what you lose in life, don’t lose faith and hope. Even if you lose all your money, family… you should still have faith. 【4】Your problems aren’t the worst. No matter what problem you get in life, there’re another one million people whose problems are huger than yours.【5】Your problems might just seem big and worse, but in reality they can be removed. Go about and solve your problems because every problem, however big or small, always has a way out.

A. But the truth is that when you talk about it, you’re setting free the negative energies that have been gathering within you.

B. When we have a problem, a pressing, critical, urgent, life-threatening problem, how do we try and solve it?

C. We can often overcome the problem and achieve the goal by making a direct attack.

D. Having a personal diary can also be of huge help if you don’t want a real person to talk with.

E. With faith and hope, you can rebuild everything that you lose.

F. Of course, we’ve been fighting troubles ever since we were born.

G. Tell yourself: when they can deal with them, why can’t I?

【题目】根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

In recent years, research on the human brain has been attracting more and more scientists. 【1】 If we compare a human brain to a hard disc(硬盘), what the scientists are doing is to make better use of the hard disc.

Experiments have started on animals. In 1999, a transplant(移植) experiment was done at the Defense and Military Physiology Research Institute in the U.S. and turned a bear into a dolphin(海豚). 【2】 They were made of the memory area in the dolphin’s brain containing information about swimming. They obtained a series of useful information, which was saved into a button-sized chip(芯片). Later the information was transplanted into the action memory area in the bear’s brain. 【3】 It proved to be a highly successful experiment and a bear was turned into a dolphin.

Not long ago, another memory transplant was performed at the Motor Nerve Research Institute of the University of California. The experiment had an entire transplant of the memory area. 【4】 The transplant was performed from a dog named “Genius” to a dog named “Idiot”. “Genius” could understand and follow up to 100 gestures and orders made by its master. It was a real genius in memorizing. However, “Idiot” had no contact with people at all since its birth. It became an animal with nothing in its brain, without any memory.

【5】 When the two dogs woke up, “Idiot” had grasped all the abilities “Genius” had; it was good at memorizing and sensible. It could follow every gestre and any command given by its master. But “Genius” gave no response to its master, and in fact did not recognize him at all.

A. The experiment was a complete success.

B. Then it was released(释放) by means of electric power.

C. One of the latest research topics is how to change the human brain or combine it with the computer.

D. Different images have different meanings in the memory area.

E. It included actions, moods, logic, words, images, etc.

F. Discoveries show that messages are carried by the central nervous system in the brain.

G. Using the most advanced technology, detailed images were produced.

【题目】阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式

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【7】 seems hard to believe that boxes of several tons of amber could go missing, and many historians have tried to solve the mystery. Most of them believe 【8】 the boxes were destroyed in the Second World War. One of the more extreme theories is that Stalin 【9】 (actual) had a second Amber Room and the Germans stole a fake (赝品).

The history of the new Amber Room, at least, is known for sure. The reconstruction (重建), 【10】 was based largely on black and white photographs of the original Amber Room, began in 1979 at Tsarskoye Selo and was completed 25 years later.

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阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（不多余3个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。

Eddie drove over to Betty’s to see her, only to find she wasn’t home, so he wrote a note: “Hi, Betty. I love you and I miss you.” He was about _【1】______(tape) the note onto her front door when he saw her car pull up. She walked up the _【2】_____(stair). Instead of the big smile, hug, and kiss that she usually greeted him with, she simply said, “What’s up?”

“You didn’t call me back for _【3】____ last two days, honey, so I came over to see you.” He gave her the note. She _【4】______(open) it, read it, and put it on the kitchen table.

“That’s sweet,” she said, 【5】____(walk) into her bedroom. Eddie followed her and tried to hug her. “I have to wash my hands,” she said. When she came out of the bathroom, she told Eddie that he should go home. She said she was hungry after a whole【6】____(tire) day, and was going to eat something 【7】___ take a nap. She added that she might call him _【8】_____(late).

【9】_____Eddie's entire five-minute visit, Betty constantly avoided his eyes. Instead of walking him out to his car, Betty locked her front door as soon as Eddie was outside her apartment, much to his 【10】____(disappoint).

【题目】根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。有两个选项为多余选项。

The Internet has opened up a whole new online world for us to meet, chat and go where we’ve never been before.

But just as in face to face communication, there are some rules ofbehavior that should be followed when on line. 【1】 Imagine how you’d feel if you were in the other person’s shoes.

For anything you’re about to send: ask yourself, “Would I say this to the person’s face? If the answer is no, rewrite and reread. 【2】

If someone in the chat room is rude to you, your instinct (本能 ) is to fire back in the same manner. But try not to do so. 【3】 If it was caused by a disagreement with another member, try to fix the situation by politely discussing it. Remember to respect opinions of others in the chat room.

【4】 Offer advice when asked by newcomers, as they may not be sure what to do or how to communicate. When someone makes a mistake, whether it’s a stupid question or an unnecessarily long answer, be kind about it. If it is a small mistake, you may not need to say anything. Having good manners yourself doesn’t give you license to correct everyone else. 【5】 At the same time, if you find you are wrong, be sure to correct yourself and apologize to those you have offended.

A. Everyone was new to the network once.

B. If you do decide to tell someone about a mistake, point it out politely.

C. It’s unusual that there are some people who speak rudely or make mistakes online.

D. The basic rule is simple: treat others in the same way you would want to be treated.

E. You should either ignore the person, or use your chat software to block their messages.

F. When you send short messages to a person online, you must say something beautiful to hear.

G. Repeat the process till you feel sure that you’d feel comfortable saying the words to the person’s face.

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