题目内容
【题目】作文
假设你是李华,请根据以下要点,给你的一位美国笔友Robert写一封E-mail,谈谈寒假的安排,并询问Robert的寒假安排。可以适当增加细节。
1.在家休息,帮父母做家务 2.参加英语培训课程
3.去朋友家玩 4.游览四川的景点
注意:1.词数100词左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头句已为你写好,但不计入总词数
提示词:培训课程 English courses, 景点 tourist attractions,安排 arrangement(n)
Dear Robert,
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory.
【答案】
Dear Robert,
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory. As you know, Winter vacation is coming. I intend to have a meaningful winter vacation. First, I will have a good rest at home, enjoying my hobbies and helping my parents do some housework. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English. Next I will go to my friend’s home and stay there for a few days. After that, I’ll pay a visit to some tourist attractions in Sichuan Province to widen/broaden my horizon.
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
Best wishes!
【解析】
试题分析:考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的,信的格式和开头语已给出,这降低了写作难度,但同时要注意第二句要接好,这也增加了难度。考生首先要仔细审题,包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,这是半开放性作文,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。应避免句式过于单一呆板,应该有长有短、错落有致;有抑有扬,使文章有很强的节奏感,这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。
本文用了很多较高级句式,比如倒装句,宾语从句,固定短语,并列句等。例如“How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory.”“I will have a good rest at home, enjoying my hobbies and helping my parents do some housework.”“am looking forward to being”文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色,注意使用高级词汇及句型句式等。