Question

【题目】作文

假设你是李华，请根据以下要点，给你的一位美国笔友Robert写一封E-mail，谈谈寒假的安排，并询问Robert的寒假安排。可以适当增加细节。

1.在家休息，帮父母做家务 2.参加英语培训课程

3.去朋友家玩 4.游览四川的景点

注意：1.词数100词左右。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头句已为你写好，但不计入总词数

提示词：培训课程 English courses, 景点 tourist attractions，安排 arrangement(n)

Dear Robert,

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Robert,

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory. As you know, Winter vacation is coming. I intend to have a meaningful winter vacation. First, I will have a good rest at home, enjoying my hobbies and helping my parents do some housework. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English. Next I will go to my friend’s home and stay there for a few days. After that, I’ll pay a visit to some tourist attractions in Sichuan Province to widen/broaden my horizon.

That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

Best wishes!

【解析】

试题分析：考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，信的格式和开头语已给出，这降低了写作难度，但同时要注意第二句要接好，这也增加了难度。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。应避免句式过于单一呆板，应该有长有短、错落有致；有抑有扬，使文章有很强的节奏感，这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。

本文用了很多较高级句式，比如倒装句，宾语从句，固定短语，并列句等。例如“How time flies! The happy days we shared often shine in my memory.”“I will have a good rest at home, enjoying my hobbies and helping my parents do some housework.”“am looking forward to being”文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，注意使用高级词汇及句型句式等。