Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first learn to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate everything that I came across it while I was reading into my own language. My teacher advised myself to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was a good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】learn → learned

【2】much →many

【3】去掉it

【4】myself → me

【5】advices → advice

【6】talk → talking

【7】with → in

【8】showed后加it

【9】very → so

【10】an → a

【解析】

试题分析：通过阅读关于记日记的好处的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题等。

【1】learn → learned 全文都是一般过去时，所以用动词的过去式learned。

【2】much →many difficulties是复数名词，所以用many 修饰。

【3】去掉it everything后的 that I came across是定语从句，that代替先行词在从句中做宾语，所以it 没有用处，一个去掉。

【4】myself → me 句意：老师建议我写日记，所以用me,而不用myself。

【5】advices → advice advice是不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。

【6】talk → talking enjoy后用动词的-ing形式，所以用talking。

【7】with → in “用英语”中的用是in，with后面跟具体的工具。如write with a pen 。

【8】showed后加it show something to somebody 向某人展示某物，it指写的日记。

【9】very → so 这里是liked so （much ）that …如此喜欢以至于……。

【10】an → a great encouragement 是辅音开头，所以用a。