题目内容
【题目】书面表达
进入湖州中学以来,学生第一次接触了社团。作为校报记者,你对学生进行了问卷调查,调查结果显示,社团深受学生欢迎。请以Students Like Associations 为题,写一篇120词左右的英语报道。调查结果如下:
1. 简介:
社团种类:音乐、美术、文学、漫画、摄影等十几个
活动时间:每周五下午4:00-5:00
活动方式:同一个社团的学生集中在一起活动
2. 收获: 有利于发展自己的特长; 学到很多课外知识; ……
3. 建议: 增加社团的种类;有老师的指导;……
注:可适当增加细节
参考词汇:社团association 文学literature 漫画manga 特长speciality
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Students Like Associations
This term our school organized more than 10 associations, including music, arts, literature, manga, photography and so on. Students can choose what they are interested in freely. The students who join the same association hold activities in the same place. The activities will take place from 4:00-5:00 every Friday.
Students think highly of the associations. They say it is useful to develop their specialties and they have learned a lot that is not in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope to see more associations and to get help from teachers. What is more, they suggest that they have chance to communicate with other schools.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求根据你对学生进行的问卷调查,调查结果显示,社团深受学生欢迎。写一篇英语报道。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型,是学生们比较熟悉的,所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。
写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚,结构清晰,要点全面。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式,增强了文章的连贯性。如定语从句who join the same association,宾语从句what they are interested in freely.非谓语动词including的使用。如:including, and so on, think highly of, a great deal of, what is more等词汇。