题目内容
【题目】 Albert Einstein said: “Life is like riding a bicycle, to keep your balance, you must keep moving”.请按下列要求写一篇100-120词的短文。
内容:
1. 针对该名言的观点谈谈你的看法和理解。
2. 并以自己或他人的经历说明理由。
【答案】
One possible version:
As most of us have experienced, once you slow down while riding a bycicle,it will become difficult to keep balance. So the key is to keep moving forward always.As for me, keeping moving means being open-minded to what is new to you.
Take my 75-year-old grandpa for example,it seems that he is never ready for an idle life and always keeps an enthusiasm for learning new things.What impresses me most is his sincerity in sharing the new knowledge with more elderly people. Thus, his balanced life has been prolonged by keeping a desire of learning.
Nowadays, the more I am aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits I will get in my daily study and job.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达要求Albert Einstein said: “Life is like riding a bicycle, to keep your balance, you must keep moving”.请按下列要求写一篇100-120词的短文。内容:1. 针对该名言的观点谈谈你的看法和理解。2. 并以自己或他人的经历说明理由。1.根据提纲设计文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 3.注意准确使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。内容要点全、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如keeping moving是非谓语短语做主语。what is new to you..是宾语从句,What impresses me most是主语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语Take …for example, keep an enthusiasm for , am aware of等。以及the more, the more的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。