题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。你校学生会正举办一场以“The Power of Smile”为主题的英文演讲比赛。你想参加此活动。请你以此为题,写一篇英文演讲稿,介绍现实生活中人们对待“微笑”的态度以及“微笑”的力量,并建议大家生活中多点微笑多点快乐。
注意: 1.词数:100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
The Power of Smile
In today’s modern society, people’s life and work are getting more and more stressful, which results in cold and serious faces everywhere, without smile. With kinds of heavy burden from their life, they even forget such excellent nature they were born with ---smile. As a result, the society now is full of indifference and coldness.
Nevertherless, smile can serve as the sunshine in winter that can warm the people living under the tough world. First of all, it is the best way to show your good image. Imagine that you go for an interview with a confident smile. It surely give you power to perform well. Besides, smile can erase one’s anger or any other negative feeling. It is said that smile before you get upset and you will achieve everything. Last but not least, by smiling to everyone, no matter who he is and how important he is to you, you will find your friends everywhere, which can be something valuable in the journey of your life.
Therefore, remember to smile everyday. Always smile, always be lucky!
【解析】
试题分析:英语演讲稿是近年来比较喜欢出现在在英语书面表达中的一种形式,遇到演讲稿这类作文题,认真研究所给提纲不能遗漏提纲要点,更不能错误理解提纲的意思。确定各段的主题句,主题句结构要完整,即结构符合语法规则;意义要完整,即主题句是一个符合逻辑的完整句子。段落写作应围绕自己列好的主题句进行,在写作过程中可稍加调整。要符合演讲的语气,要注意动词的时态及主语的人称。
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