题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你想参加剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜,要点如下:
1、表达你的意愿;
2、咨询相关事宜。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge. And your advertisement about the summer camp caught my attention.
I am a student in China. Would you be so kind as to tell me more information about the camp. First of all, I’d like to know when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week? Second, how much do I have to pay for the course and does the cost cover the accommodation? Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?
I would be most grateful if you could send me the information. Looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你想参加剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜,要点如下:1、表达你的意愿;2、咨询相关事宜。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):dream of (梦想);be admitted to(录取);University of Cambridge (剑桥大学);catch my attention(引起我的注意);accommodation (住宿)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。