Question

20．A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day．As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank，he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car．He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving．Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried．Arthur stopped and asked，"It looks like you've got a problem，"Arthur said．
"I'm afraid so．I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car．"
"Is there something I can do to help？"Arthur asked．The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，
"Thanks．If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi．"
"No trouble at all．I'd be glad to help．"
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat．After placing it on the ground，he turned to get the other one．Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking，he heard the loud noise of an alarm．
It was from te bank．There had been a robbery!
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before．Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions．Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank．People asked each other，"What happened？"But everyone had a different answer．
Arthur，still carrying the suitcase，turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him．
She looked at the suitcase and then at him．Arthur was surprised．"Why is she looking at me like that？"He thought．"The suitcase!She thinks I'm the bank thief!"
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people．He became frightened，and without another thought，he started to run．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，"Stop，stop!"Arthur immediatelyrealized that the young manwas the bank robber．So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him．He quickly put the suitcasein the car and said to the driver，"Please hurry to the Police Station．I have a case to report to the police．The man shouting behind is the bank thief!''The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow．
Paragraph 2：
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur．said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received therobberyreport，This suitcaseis that of the bank robber．It may be filled with the money stolen fromthe bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man．"．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him
因此亚瑟并没有停止，而是继续运行，直到他看到了在他前面的一辆出租车．
高分句型二：
It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man．
它充满了从银行偷来的钱，我把它交给你．请准备逮捕的人．

解答 As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，"Stop，stop!" Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank robber．So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him（高分句型一）．He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver，"Please hurry to the Police Station．I have a case to report to the police．The man shouting behind is the bank thief!''The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow．
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report，This suitcase is that of the bank robber．It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank，I hand it to you．Please get ready to arrest the man（高分句型二）．"

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．