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12．校刊"英语园地"为配合学校创建"绿色学校"的工作，开展了"创建绿色学校英语征文活动"，请根据下列提示用英文写一篇征文稿，内容要求如下：
1．浪费水、电
2．乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等
3．…
个人看法和建议
1．对学生进行环保教育
2．从关灯、回收废物等小事做起
3．…
注意：1．词数：80～120词左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．文章的第一段已给出，但不计入总词数．
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school．However，there are still a lot of problems in the school．Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on．It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）Additionally，students do not recycle enough，throwing away the soft drink bottles，used exercise papers and books．Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness．It's important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly．At the same time，students can do small things，such as collecting used items for recycling，turning off the lights，saving water．Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息校刊"英语园地"为配合学校创建"绿色学校"的工作，开展了"创建绿色学校英语征文活动"，请根据下列提示用英文写一篇征文稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：浪费水、电；乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等；个人看法和建议   对学生进行环保教育；从关灯、回收废物等小事做起
  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：However然而；come across 遇到；Additionally另外；throw away扔掉；Worse still更糟的是；At the same time同时；turn off 关闭；
It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）
Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）

解答 The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school．However，there are still a lot of problem in the school．
       Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on．It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）Additionally，students do not recycle enough，throwing away the soft drink bottles，used exercise papers and books．Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
       These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness．It's important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly．At the same time，students can do small things，such as collecting used items for recycling，turning off the lights，saving water．Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．