Question

17．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．请按下列要求改正：
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Yesterday I together with my elder brother was a college student went shopping．At the gate of the store，we meet a homeless man，Frank．He said he lost his home in the hurricane but he had no place to have a good sleep．He was begged and trying to get﹩25，so he could get four hours in a cheap hotel where he could sleep without not anyone bothering him．All he had to keep him warmly was a jacket．When my brother came out of the store he had bought the new coat．In my surprise，he walked up to Frank and handed him the new coat．Frank said，"Did you buy this for me？"My brother said no，but he wanted Frank to have them．Frank just stood there holding the coat，almost in tear．

Answer 1

分析 昨天和哥哥去购物时遇到一个无家可归的人，他说由于飓风失去的房子，所以乞讨25美元能住个便宜的旅馆，在旅馆里能睡一觉．我哥哥到商店里买了一件新大衣送给他，他很感动．

解答 Yesterday I together with my elder brother∧was a college student went shopping．At the gate of the store，we meet a homeless man，Frank．He said he lost his home in the hurricane but he had no place to have a good sleep．He was begged and trying to get $ 25，so he could get four hours in a cheap hotel where he could sleep Without not anyone bothering him．All he had to keep him warmly was a jacket．When my brother came ou of the store he had bought the new coat．In my surprise，he walked up to Frank and handed him the new coat．Frank said，"Did you buy this for me？"My brother said no，but he wanted Frank to have them．Frank just stood there holding the coat，almost in tear．
解析：
1．brother后加 who/that．考查定语从句的关系词．代指先行词  my elder brother做定语从句was a college student的主语，用 who/that．
2．meet---met．考查谓语动词的时态．根据开头可知本文讲述的是过去的事，所以本句的谓语动词用过去式met．
3．but---and/so．考查连词．he had no place to have a good sleep表示"他没地方睡觉"，是上句的结果，所以用and/so连接两句．
4．begged---begging．考查谓语动词的形式．beg和主语He之间是主动关系，表示"正在进行"，所以用 begging和trying构成并列谓语．
5．去掉 not．考查语义一致．本句表示"不受打扰"，而Without表示"没有"，所以去掉 not．
6．warmly---warm．考查形容词的用法．做keep him 的补语，表示"让他保持温暖"应该用形容词warm．
7．the---a．考查冠词．第一次提到，表示"一件新的上衣"用a new coat．
8．In---To．考查介词．to my surprise是固定短语，表示"让我吃惊的是"．
9．them---it．考查代词．代指单数名词the new coat用it．
10．tear---tears．考查名词．固定短语in tears表示"流泪的"．

点评 考查短文改错．
短文改错时要注意一下几点：1．快速阅读，整体把握短文大意．2．重视语境以及上下文的关系．3．充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在．