Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

When we get some money as a gift, how to deal with the money becomes a problem we must face. From my perspective, the answers are diverse in different periods. However, no matter how you deal with the money, the most important thing is to use it wisely.

In my childhood, when the cartoons about the car race extremely attracted me, I would use the money I received to buy toy cars. But when I entered the school, toys could not attract me. In this period, the things I wanted most were some electronic products. I always hurried to buy the up-to-date mobile phone immediately I received money as a gift.

Now I have got a job, the things above me not important for me. I do not need some useless things or something I have already had. Probably, saving money in the bank is my best choice.

In conclusion, if I receive a sum of money, in different periods I may have different choices. Whatever I choose to do with the gift of money, it must make me feel happy.

[写作内容] 1. 用约 30 个单词概括上文的主要内容; 2. 用约 120 个单词就“收到零用钱为礼物”发表你的观点，内容包括: (1)你怎么看待以钱作为礼物； (2)收到钱时，你怎么处理它； (3)你认为青少年用钱时需要注意什么。

[写作要求]

1. 可使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子;

2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句;

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

4. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】

The way the author deals with money as a gift changes over time. In the past he would use it to buy toy cars or mobile phones but now he chooses to save it in the bank.

Money is always the last thing I would consider as a present. Instead, I prefer to send such gifts as a purse or a pen so that the receivers can use them every day, which is a good way to recall the sincere friendship between us.

When I receive money as a gift, I will put it away, for I intend to travel to France next summer. Besides, Ive decided to donate a small portion of the money to poor children so that they can have a chance to study like me.

It is important for teenagers to develop the ability to handle money. First, as teenagers, we should have a plan rather than use money without control. What’s more, we can use the money to help others, because as the saying goes, to give is better than to receive.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，请你用约 30 个单词概括上文的主要内容;用约 120 个单词就“收到零用钱为礼物”发表你的观点，内容包括:(1)你怎么看待以钱作为礼物；(2)收到钱时，你怎么处理它；(3)你认为青少年用钱时需要注意什么。 写作时要注意审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇合格的书面表达。首先第一段是30词的概括，后文是你的观点。用了较多加分的句子，例如： I’ve decided to donate a small portion of the money to poor children so that they can have a chance to study like me是一个so that引导的目的状语从句，再如： First, What’s more让文章条理更加清晰。