题目内容
13.假设你叫李华,现在在英国工作,你的朋友陈立写信告诉你他打算赴英留学,想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难.请你用英语给他写一封回信,信的内容应包括:1.可能会遇到的困难:语言方面的障碍,饮食的不习惯,想家孤独等; 2.鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他.
注意:1.词数100个左右. 2.信的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Chen Li,
I'm glad to hear from you.You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 假设你叫李华,现在在英国工作,你的朋友陈立写信告诉你他打算赴英留学,想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难.请你用英语给他写一封回信,信的内容应包括:1.可能会遇到的困难:语言方面的障碍,饮食的不习惯,想家孤独等;2.鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他.要把所提示的点写全,把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系.根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩,注意要求的字数在100词左右,不要太多或太少.信的开头结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
【亮点说明】You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.句中含有一个when引导的时间状语从句;First,you may have the problem about the language you think you are well prepared.此句中运用了定语从句和被动语态;You may find it difficult to communicate with the natives,because many of them have a strong accent.句中使用了because引导的原因状语从句,并把it作形式主语的用法渗透在句中;Several weeks later,you will get used to everything here and love the place,and I'll also try my best to help you when necessary.
这是一个并列句,而且运用了Several weeks later/get used to/try my best短语,显得句子很有章法,文章很有层次.
解答 Dear Chen Li,
I'm glad to hear from you.You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now,I'd like to tell you something about it.
First,you may have the problem about the language you think you are well prepared.(高分句型)You may find it difficult to communicate with the natives,because many of them have a strong accent.Besides,you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it.What's more,you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends,especially in the very beginning.(高分句型)
However,you needn't worry about it.Several weeks later,you will get used to everything here and love the place,and I'll also try my best to help you when necessary.(高分句型)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
