短文改错 (共10处错误.每处1分.共10分) 文中共有10处语言错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 2. 只允许修改10处.多者不记分. 3. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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短文改错 (共10处错误，每处1分，共10分)

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

3. 各位考生请注意，请严格按照高考的改错格式进行改错。格式不正确不得分！

Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote around 480

books that including mystery stories, science and history books, and even books

about the Holy Bible and Shakespeare. So he is best known to his science fiction

stories. Asimov had both an extraordinary imagination that gave him the ability

to explore future worlds and an amazing mind on which he searched

explanations of everything, in the present and the past. Asimov's life began in

Russia, when she was born on 2 January, 1920. It ended in New York on 6 April,

1992, when he died as a result of a HIV infection that he had got from a blood

transfusion nine years early.

【答案】

第一句去掉a;

第一句把including改成included;

第二句把So改成But(B不大写不得分);

第二句把to改成for;

第三句把on改为with;

第三句在searched后面加for;

第四句when改为where;

第四句把she改成he;

第五句第二个a改为an;

第五句把early改为earlier;

【解析】

试题分析：

第一句去掉a;这里只有一个人，既是科学家也是作家。故a是多余的。

第一句把including改成included; 本句中使用过去式，指这本书里包括很多的故事。

第二句把So改成But(B不大写不得分);上下文之间存在着转折的关系，故使用but。

第二句把to改成for;固定搭配be famous for因为…而出名。

第三句把on改为with;介词with表示使用…；指使用这些技巧和思维。

第三句在searched后面加for;固定搭配search for寻找…；

第四句when改为where;本句是定语从句，先行词是Russia这是一个地名，故使用where在句中做地点状语。

第四句把she改成he;本句中的Asimov是男性。

第五句第二个a改为an;名词HIV是以元音发音开始的，故使用an来修饰。

第五句把early改为earlier; 指9年前nine years earlier

考点：考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。

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