Question

短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）

Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 boy 前加a

 but改为and;

 classmate改为 classmates

 instead 后加 of

  she 改为 he

 serious 改为 seriously

  sent 前加 was

 late 改为 later

 去掉told 前 had

 for后 that 改为 what

【解析】

试题分析：

 boy 是可数名词，前加a，句意：从前有个男孩

 他妈妈很胖和他说话太多，是并列关系，不是转折关系：but改为and;

 考查名词：teachers是复数，classmate也应该改为 classmates

 instead是副词，要是接宾语 后加 of

 根据句意应该是男孩每次付给他50块钱，she 改为 he

 修饰形容词ill应该是副词seriously

 句意：他被老师送到医院，用过去时的被动：sent 前加 was

 表示“几天后”用a few days later

 和cried并列用过去时told

 for后面的宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语： that 改为 what

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。